Magnificent Magic

King Kong

I switched on the X-Box and got transported into another world. I wasn't in Apiti anymore. I was on Skull island. I ticked through the levels. I let David choose one called Ann. He was in thick jungle.
Not knowing what to do he wasted all his ammo trying to get an ammo pack out of a tree.
After he ran out, he grabbed a spear and had a go with that again. No result.
I snatched the remote off him and got out the ammo pack and shot a couple of Raptors for him and went and played on the computer. Suddenly there was screaming!  Guess what ... David wasn't murdered. He just got eaten in the game. I had enough and walked outside.

My race was up. HOOT SPLASH!!! The Swimmers flew into the water as if they were rag dolls. Glug Glug Glug went bubbles shooting out of my mouth. I was swimming in a medley in the first heat. I twisted and turned as I fly though all of the different strokes. When I finished I found myself three metres ahead of

More Rugby

The second half started against th chiefs in our final match. The coaches got us all revved up that this is going to be the last 30 minutes of this season and I was determined to make that count. We ran on to the field    20-20 all. We were getting kicked to I caught the ball.

The Avengers. Earths Mightiest Heros.

'I'm not going to get bullied by an ugly fat monster" said Looki. 'You should be respecting me I am a GOD!' Looki continued. Looki had just tempered the Hulk and you DO NOT mess with the HULK. Suddenly the incredible  Hulk picked up Looki by the legs and crushed his head into the ground five times. The Hulk let go of Looki's crushed legs and said one thing "puny god'. Mean while Hawkeye had some other problems on his hands. An alien carrier had just come by and started shooting him. Hawkeye raised his bow and fired his arrow. With his good skill he could have shot that without his eyes closed. Well in fact he had done that five minutes ago. More alien carriers were coming towards him. " Hurry up Black Widow shut that portal' he said. Caiptan America was also having a hard time himself as for him he was in the streets. Aliens were coming from every where trying to kill civilians.  

Water slide

The current was strong. White water was every where! I let go of the bar. My body flew with the current. I was going as fast as a gun shot. Jake was waiting at the bottom well at least I thought he was. Suddenly as I hit a corner I saw Jake. He had planted his legs and arms around the tube of the slide. I zoomed past him and my head smacked on his leg. 'Ouch' I said giggly.  

Trail Bike Ride 2012

I was absolutely bored out of my mind. I had been standing here for like ... 2 hours. I don't know why! I just had to go and ask Mrs Digby! She let me go to get some lunch. 
Okay I thought, I was bored but even more than I being bored, I was hungry. Not just hungry! I was starving. For lunch I had FIVE sausages and a muffin. 
Six hours later I was hanging from a tree avoiding the flashing light. I wanted to dodge that light as much as a monster. I held my breath as hard as a nut srewed onto a bolt. I closed my eyes until I heard a voice......

All Blacks

Joe Rokokoko was running down the sideline. He was going to score yet another try for the All Blacks. He dived to succeed in getting the 8th  try for the All Blacks. I still couldn't believe that I was watching the
All Blacks. I also couldn't believe that the All Blacks were topping the Wallibies 53-3. I also couldn't believe that Ben was sleeping through all of it!
The westpac stadium was full of cheers as the full time hooter blew as loud as a fire engine. Suddenly me and Dad got up. Dad hauled Ben off his little seat and we started to leave the stadium. As tsunami of people came towards us...... I had just seen the

     ALL BLACKS

Rucking Rugby

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The ball sailed though the air faster than a fly. Immediately I sprinted up. I was a bit nervous about facing this team because it was basically North Harbour from last year but with a little adjustments. 
As I was saying, I was still sprinting. Ten hard tough cool awesome extreme minutes later and the score was nil-nil to no one. 
Well as we got to our next game, it was more exciting because our opponents were hard and easy at the same time - harsy. Kick! Run! Pass! 
Now it was my turn to run. I ran up the side line, side stepped and sprinted hard out to make it a try.
WE kicked off. I ran up fast as a Rhino but I missed the tackle. 
Five minutes later I got the ball again. I bowled over someone and scored another try. Then the game was basically done. Next we were versing the Blues; not the real Blues but the little Blues. We wasted them. 2-0 to the Oroua Highlanders (that's us.)